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Wednesday, May 5, 2010

assignment 1 - composition, structure, grouping in 2D

Nurgul Isik

2 comments:

  1. the colour poster is simple and effective at the same time (i can feel optimism and togetherness), focusing the attention in the central part.

    The visual poster shuold be revised, it is not clear what is comunicated.

    the 3D poster give the feeling of togetherness, maybe would be better with less reflection.

    The coposition poster is well done, focusing the attention to the map. An improovement can be increasing the value of togetherness and/or using a vectorial graphic

    Good Job!
    Francesco from team 12

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  2. The poster focus you to one point; the maps in the Delft blue Circle. The collage shows in a short time a good impression where the message is about. The text in the upper side of the poster is too long, it is not attractive to read it. The title is too small and not placed at the right position; it should be placed on top, were you start reading. Aesthetically nice composition, communication could be better though.

    group 19

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